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-//"General, the Vidyadhara's letter of appeal is here." — Qingzu.\\
+//"General, the Vidyadhara's letter of appeal is here." — Qingzu\\
 "They gave this to the Six Charioteers and not to the Ten-Lords Commission, probably knowing that the Commission would never reply to them, thus deciding to appeal to the Six Charioteers instead. I didn't anticipate my first problem as the general would be something completely unrelated to military affairs..."//
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+**__To the Esteemed General Jing Yuan:__**
+I was alarmed to learn that you had signed an exile order to permanently cast out the sinner Dan Feng from the Luofu. Whereon do you place the reputation of the Luofu's Vidyadhara with this order, general?
+According to the deal between the Alliance and the Caelorum Venti of the Yaoqing, the sinner Dan Feng was to be spared from death and instead suffer the punishment of molting rebirth. After that, according to Vidyadhara customs, Dan Feng should have been regarded as a new being and his sins forgiven. However, the Ten-Lords Commission detained him under the guise of educating the young man, while keeping him prisoner in truth. We have endured this for so long due to the truly astounding nature of his sin. Were he not to suffer for some days within the Shackling Prison, the multitudes of Luofu residents would not be appeased in their anger.
+However, general, you have arbitrarily terminated his sentence and decided to exile Dan Feng. Was this a consensus reached after a discussion with the Six Charioteers? And was this sent to the Marshal to be confirmed? If your action stemmed from your past friendship with Dan Feng, then we regret to inform you that we cannot accept such a sentimental gesture. We Preceptors will appeal to the Alliance and inform the other four High Elders, and we will seek to have you retract this order.
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+**__Yours respectfully,\\
+Shaoying, Vidyadhara Preceptor__**
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+//"The Vidyadhara handed us thousands of letters of appeal during the past few centuries... and this one has the harshest wording. They are running out of patience." — Qingzu\\
+"The exile was approved by the Ten-Lords Commission. Since Dan Feng had already been reborn and his sins are to be forgotten, why won't the Preceptors allow him to leave this troubled place...? Interesting."//
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