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--- readable:saga:prisoner.of.flames:ii [2025/09/18 19:18] – [2-3] anadmin
+++ readable:saga:prisoner.of.flames:ii [2025/10/29 20:52] (current) – [2-5] anadmin
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 ====== II. One-Way Journey from the Past ======
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 ==== 2-1 ====
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 <color #993333>//"Even a rake would do.//\\
-//Let its worth be judged by the verses I compose with it."//</color>[(Spoken by young Phainon.)]
+//Let its worth be judged by the verses I compose with it."//</color>
 {{ :readable:saga:prisoner.of.flames:khaslana2-1.png?200|An image of hay stacks.}}
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 ==== 2-2 ====
-<color #efe4B0>//"Let go of my beard, you white-haired rascal[(Spoken dialogue says 'brat'.)]!"//</color>\\
+<color #efe4B0>//"Let go of my beard, you white-haired rascal//[(Spoken dialogue says 'brat'.)]//!"//</color>\\
-<color #993333>//"No."//</color>[(Spoken by young Phainon.)]\\
+<color #993333>//"No."//</color>\\
 <color #efe4B0>//"Fine... You win, okay?"//</color>
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 <color #993333>//"The victor must stay focused, and success will come//\\
-//when you work on nothing else."//</color>[(Spoken by Phainon.)]\\
+//when you work on nothing else."//</color>\\
 Those words became the foundation of his existence.
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 ==== 2-4 ====
+When first arriving at the holy city,\\
+He was no more skilled than a soldier,\\
+Except his ambition —
+<color #993333>//"Even the Deliverer from the sky,//\\
+//Must have their beginning in the soil of the nations."//</color>
+The Elders in the holy city scorned,\\
+Casting him into barracks in derision.
+But none expected,\\
+This new recruit of unknown history,\\
+Made his name in one mission.
+Some asked him:\\
+Which teacher caused such improvement?\\
+He answers with countless names,\\
+Including the inquirer's own.
+<color #993333>//"Only one who treats the world as their teacher...//\\
+//Can bear its eventual destiny."//</color>
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 ==== 2-5 ====
+<color #efe4B0>//"Those with golden blood are bound to succeed."//\\
+//"The golden heroes are born as gods' beloved."//</color>
+Such words echo in the man's mind,\\
+Yet he knows glory is not where the journey begins.
+He misses the buried rake,\\
+Worshiped the enemy with the long beard,\\
+Mended his tattered books,\\
+And polished the barrack's dust-covered gear.
+<color #993333>//"What forges a hero is not destiny from above...//\\
+//But the long journey that follows."//</color>
+{{ :readable:saga:prisoner.of.flames:khaslana2-5.png?200|Image of a young man's chest, golden blood splashing across it.}}
+Now he stands here and looks back,\\
+And his past twists into a winding path.
+The long road to the sky stretches ahead.\\
+And towards the blazing white sun,\\
+He pens down <color #993333>Deliverance</color>'s name.